Cool, I like the changes overall but the text at the bottom and on the side is still weak and too hard to read. Less outer glow is in store I believe. Also, the words need to be more accessible. No one will know what the event is if we just say "in the spirit of freemasonry, etc." It should be more like: electronic music supplied by _____, lots of bass, psyphy, etc. Let's work on it later today...
i wanted to comment after reading the flyer, I just want everyone to i didn't chose the words, but I loved it and would pay to go to that show...
i get zachs concerns though,
-however if you think you'd rather have more "idiots" than informed artsies like ourselves, than be my guest... -I just think at least this way our efforts are justified because at least this show sounds like it has a purpose.
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Cool, I like the changes overall but the text at the bottom and on the side is still weak and too hard to read. Less outer glow is in store I believe. Also, the words need to be more accessible. No one will know what the event is if we just say "in the spirit of freemasonry, etc." It should be more like: electronic music supplied by _____, lots of bass, psyphy, etc. Let's work on it later today...
and include the artists
i wanted to comment after reading the flyer, I just want everyone to i didn't chose the words, but I loved it and would pay to go to that show...
i get zachs concerns though,
-however if you think you'd rather have more "idiots" than informed artsies like ourselves, than be my guest... -I just think at least this way our efforts are justified because at least this show sounds like it has a purpose.
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